Friday, January 29, 2016

Research

Notes:

Sting & Venom:
  • Triggered by chemical on prey  
  •  Attacks ~ Heart, nervous system, and skin cells
  • Kills within minutes
  • Significant pain
  • horrible scars
Paragraph: 
The sting of the Box Jellyfish is one of the most horrible experience because of the venom . It attacks the heart, nervous system, and damages skin cells. The venom one stung can kill within minutes. The venom causes significant pain and can leave horrible scars (National Geographic.) 

Friday, January 15, 2016

Paraphrasing

Title: Hey You! Wake Up!

Paragraph 1

Step 1: Notes
  • Crummy Night Sleep = groggy, forgetful, clumsy 
  • 24 No Sleep = legally drunk 
  • Brain cells died because lack of sleep
Step 2: Paraphrase Paragraph

Having lack of sleep, in the night, can leave with many side affects such as grogginess, forgetfulness, and clumsiness. In fact if you go a day without sleep you seem like you're drunk. Brain cells can also die because of lack of sleep.

Paragraph 2

Step 1: Notes

  • No sleep puts adults and kids at risk 
  • No sleep = horrible damage
  • Risks of kids: Depression, anxiety, obesity, bad grades, sports injuries, low self-esteem, and serious diseases 
  • Risks of adults: concentration, health, job performance, and mood
Step 2: Paraphrase Paragraph
Having a lack of sleep can affect both kids and adults with horrible side affects.  It affects grown-ups in many ways such as, concentration loss, poor health, horrible job performance, and always being in a bad mood. It affects kids in a even more horrible way, they get depression, anxiety, obesity, bad grades, sports injuries, low self-esteem, and serious diseases.