Friday, January 15, 2016

Paraphrasing

Title: Hey You! Wake Up!

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Step 1: Notes
  • Crummy Night Sleep = groggy, forgetful, clumsy 
  • 24 No Sleep = legally drunk 
  • Brain cells died because lack of sleep
Step 2: Paraphrase Paragraph

Having lack of sleep, in the night, can leave with many side affects such as grogginess, forgetfulness, and clumsiness. In fact if you go a day without sleep you seem like you're drunk. Brain cells can also die because of lack of sleep.

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Step 1: Notes

  • No sleep puts adults and kids at risk 
  • No sleep = horrible damage
  • Risks of kids: Depression, anxiety, obesity, bad grades, sports injuries, low self-esteem, and serious diseases 
  • Risks of adults: concentration, health, job performance, and mood
Step 2: Paraphrase Paragraph
Having a lack of sleep can affect both kids and adults with horrible side affects.  It affects grown-ups in many ways such as, concentration loss, poor health, horrible job performance, and always being in a bad mood. It affects kids in a even more horrible way, they get depression, anxiety, obesity, bad grades, sports injuries, low self-esteem, and serious diseases.

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